Thursday, January 25, 2024

Just Visiting

Susan pulled the car up to the house where her mom was waiting in the driveway. Susan looked over to her husband, he seemed nervous. This was the first time since their wedding that they’d seen Susan’s parents, and she knew her mom had always given Tom a hard time.

“Relax, Tom,” Susan assured him, “My mom can just be over protective, but she loves you.”

The conversation didn’t even get to start as it was interupted by the loud nasally voice of Susan’s mom, “Why if it isn’t my daughter and my favorite son-in-law. I don’t know why it took you so long to visit. Susan, why don’t you go say hello to your father inside?”

Susan nodded and went in.

“It’s good to see you, Mrs. Lee,” Tom’s body said.

“You can cut the shit. She can’t hear you out here. You stole my body on my wedding day! And I need answers! Why? Why did you do it? It’s got to be weird stuck in the body of your own daughter’s husband!”

Mrs. Lee inside Tom’s body laughed, “It is. And I didn’t want to be you. That’s for sure. But you weren’t good enough for my daughter. You couldn’t provide enough for her, and I wasn’t going to let you bring my daughter down to your level, so I did what I had to do, and I became you. And that meant that you had to become me. I hope you are happy with my body and my life. I know from first hand experience how handsy Mr. Lee can be at night.”

“Fuck you, Mrs. Lee. I’m going to find a way back to my own body no matter what!”

3 comments:

  1. Is there going to be a follow-up with the true Son-n-law getting his body back? And why hasn't Tom in Mrs. Lee what the real mother in Tom's body did to him? To bad This conversation was tape recorded some way.

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  2. Love this story. Wish it would continue. Tom must now be Mrs Lee and mother in law to his former wife. Love it so much.

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    1. How long have they been swapped? I am sure the new Mrs Lee has gotten very close to Mr. Lee over this time. lol.

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